Visual Storytelling: How to Write What You See

August 28th, 2011

girl with 8mm cameraThe world of writing is almost as vast as the imaginations of those that work in it, so it’s important to know where you want to go in it and what will be required to get there. Whether you want to be screenwriter, novelist, poet, or non-fiction writer, there are challenges each miche within the world presents, and it’s up to you to learn how to succeed.

For screenwriters, the world presents the challenge of writing what you see … visual storytelling.

Here are a few things to keep in mind:

Always Write For Your Audience

Though this may not seem like a difficult challenge, for many it is because it involves a completely different type of thinking. Unlike the novelist, who is free to wander and explore the world she creates both mentally and visually, the screenwriter is limited to the latter. Exploring the world of story in a visual manner, because even though both the novelist and the screenwriter share the same audience in the beginning (the reader), the screenwriter’s story will eventually evolve into a visual rendition for a different audience — the audience watching the screen.

Because the audience of the screenwriter is different than that of the novelist or poet, the screenwriter needs to approach the telling of her story differently.

Be An Observer First, Writer Second

In order to tell a story visually, you need to train yourself to see the world visually. Instead of going through your day as you have up to this point, watch how it works, watch as events unfold, see how people treat each other, look for moments normally hidden away or lost and take note. Chances are, if you’ve become interested in screenwriting, it’s because you’re both interested in movies and interested in writing, so you may have a strong idea of how to tell a story visually in the first place; yet, there’s always room to improve and hone your craft, so you should always be exercising your skills as an observer. If not, here are a few things to help you get started — one trick I’ve picked up on personally is to spend a little too much time observing your subject … this will enable you to really see it as opposed to what others might see at a glance:

  • Look at your surroundings.
  • Notice the weather.
  • Watch how people interact within different relationship dynamics.
  • See what people do when they don’t think they’re being watched.

While observing, imagine how you might frame the scene and present it to audiences.

Describe What’s Happening Visually

Once you start looking at the world as an observer, you can then describe what you see in your mind as you imagine your story. If you’re still having trouble, think of it like this:

You’re always the director when you dream — you pick the angles and control how the story pans out, — telling a story visually is no different. You simply need to describe how you see the imagery in your head and present it from the best angle possible. If there’s a lot of camera movement, be sure to imply it within your screenplay. If little happens (say you’re in a meadow and you’re enjoying the sound of the wind and feel of the breeze), then you can imply little camera movement.

Before I digress into whether or not to include camera direction in your screenplay, let’s focus on the idea at hand — telling your story visually.

  • Focus on small moments between characters
  • Describe the setting
  • Reveal actions of your characters
  • Bring the reader into the action

Remember, your task as a screenwriter is to tell your story visually — the best way to do that is to describe what you see in your mind as you imagine your story.

How Do You Write What You See?

I’d love to hear what all of the screenwriters here do in terms of approaching your story more visually? Have you had trouble moving from internalized storytelling to a more externalized type of storytelling?

Look forward to hearing what you guys do with your own writing!

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Tell a story you wish existed

August 27th, 2011

girl gazing out windowOne of the more common reasons why screenwriters fall short in their efforts to write their first screenplay is because they’re writing what they think they should be writing instead of what they want to be writing.

It’s sad really … it’s a parallel to working a job you don’t like.

When you first set out to create your next screenplay, whether or not it’s your first, ask yourself if it’s something you want to tell. If the story isn’t something you want to tell, then why tell it? Chances are you’re not being paid yet, so there’s really no reason. If you’re writing a romantic comedy because every screenwriter needs to have one of those in their arsenal of work, you’re wasting your time. Writers aren’t required to meet certain prerequisites — they simply need to do a good job telling a store for the screen.

The best way to focus your efforts and really find success with you writing and storytelling is simple: tell a story you wish existed.

This will enable you to cut the ties to what you think you’re supposed to do and free you to focus on what you want to do, which is tell a good story.

If you’re indifferent toward your story, how can you expect others to be any different?

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The Scriptxray Reboot

March 24th, 2011

If you’re a regular reader, you’ve noticed Scriptxray recently experienced a long period of down-time.

This down-time was in light of my personal schedule and inability to keep up with the demands of writing for the blog on a regular basis. In addition to my professional work, I also started several other projects to satisfy the itch to explore other areas of interest.

But in that time, I’ve missed writing about the independent screenwriter and how he or she can leapfrog the Hollywood gatekeepers.

I’ve been slowly but surely working my way back toward a schedule that enables me to work on my personal projects.

I have big plans for Scriptxray, and just wanted to thank you for sticking with during the long haul.

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I’m hoping to publish a weekly newsletter of sorts in the future, but for now this subscription option will send subscribers the latest content from Scriptxray as soon as it’s available.

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Save $65 on Screenplay Coverage

January 21st, 2011

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In effort to start the new year with a bang, I’ve decided to discount the screenplay coverage service I offer over 50%!

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Create Depth With Character Baggage

January 19th, 2011

screenwriting tips character depthIt’s no secret that some of the most interesting, three-dimensional characters are those that express a variety of emotions throughout a story. This gives the reader or audience the opportunity to connect with them on multiple levels, because the more human a character seems, the more believable he or she becomes in the story.

Another way to achieve a more human character is to create depth with character baggage.

Character baggage is just like any other feature of a character. However, unlike common features, baggage usually sparks some sort of emotion in the character. For example, in Vicky Christina Barcelona Juan Antonio’s character jumps off screen because of his emotional baggage with his ex-wife, Maria Elena. His baggage is interesting because he both criticizes and idolizes her, so though he may have renounced love because of their failed marriage, he realizes that their love was powerful.

Character baggage should inform character, otherwise it will seem stilted. Craft the backstory of your character and think about what may have happened during that time that helped shape the character.

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Main Character or Ensemble Cast For Your Screenplay?

January 14th, 2011

screenwriting ensemble character

One of the more common things I see from screenwriters submitting their work is the inclusion of an ensemble cast of characters. The ensemble cast is one of those things that readers repeatedly encounter with under-developed screenplays, so it’s important to be sure your story is best told with an ensemble cast rather than a main character. Otherwise, your reader will spot it as a red flag during the reading … and you only get so many of those before he or she has to pass on your work.

It all comes down to the story. Read the rest of this entry »

How Many Screenplays Have You Written? [POLL]

June 19th, 2010

If you’ve ever been in a screenwriting class or workshop, you’ve probably come across the question, “How many screenplays have you written?” — I thought it might be fun to ask the community here.

With visitors from all around the world, it might be interesting to see the results.

Cast your vote and see how many screenplays others have written.

Update: Competition Deadline Extended

June 1st, 2010

In light of the pretty vocal demand I received this past weekend regarding the deadline falling on Memorial Day weekend, I’ve decided to extend the competition deadline four days — bringing the competition deadline to Friday the 4th.

I hope this helps the writers out there that were interested in submitting but found themselves either away from home or just too busy celebrating.

Also, for those still waiting on their xOne Coverage from the Strongest Screenplay Competition, sit tight — your coverage is on its way! As said before, the submissions were overwhelming to say the least … and to provide helpful, worthwhile coverage for each one is definitely a challenge. If you haven’t already, check out the three winners.

The Feature Screenplay Competition was a bit different — though I’ve amplified the prizes a bit with ScriptStork’s help, the amount of submissions was only a fraction of the first competition. Understandable considering this competition focuses on completed works, which not only requires completed screenplays, but the willingness to share your work, which a lot of writer’s fear more than anything else.

For those that have no fear in sharing their work, there are a bunch of prizes waiting for the winner, including free xCoverage ($125 value) and a free stork ($75 value) from ScriptStork.com.

I hope you had enjoyed your weekend, and look forward to reading your submission!

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Congrats John Feeney! Strongest Story Setup Competition Winner

May 25th, 2010

To wrap of the Strongest Story Setup Competition, I’m proud to announce the third winner …

John Feeney

John demonstrated an excellent talent in story setup — not only was the submission tight in terms of style and pace, but the story was compelling right from the first sentence.

Congrats!

Congrats Michelle Rottler! Strongest Story Setup Competition Winner

May 25th, 2010

After much delay, I’m happy to announce the second winner of the strongest story setup competition.

Michelle Rottler

Michelle Rottler revealed the cunning ability to setup a believable world in which a humorous character encounters a problem of extraordinary measures just when he thought his problems couldn’t get worse, with her submission, titled The Obituary.

Again, it was tough to make a decision with such an awesome collection of submissions, but Michelle clearly earned this one.

Congrats!

Congrats Lori Othouse! Strongest Story Setup Competition Winner

May 15th, 2010

Last month’s screenplay competition was a definite surprise — not only did the community of writers reading the blog grow tremendously, but there was an awesome turnout of writers that submitted their screenplay.

I’d originally planned on holding monthly competitions, announcing the winner on the last day of the month, and introducing the next … needless to say, I underestimated big time — and understand why some competitions encourage early submissions.

For those that need a quick recap: The screenplay competition held last April (2010) was focused on discovering the writer that proved to be the best at creating a strong story setup for their screenplay. The competition was fierce … I even contemplated announcing a tie, but ultimately decided against it.

There are three winners to this competition, and for now they place equally among each other.

Lori Othouse

Though the competition was tough, Lori demonstrated an exceptionally strong story setup with her submission, Apart From Me, that, like so many of the submissions, left me wanting more!

Keep your eyes peeled for the second and third winners! (Subscribe via email to stay in the loop)

xCoverage

Lori will receive the xCoverage service ($125 value) free and I’ll be making the announcement to the social community of fellow writers on facebook and twitter shortly.

xOne Coverage

I took a lot of notes during the reading of the submissions, so I’ll be going back over them to create the xOne coverage for all participants. Thanks for being so patient — I’m a newbie at this so I really appreciate it. I was hoping to get the xOne coverage reports out to everyone immediately after the announcement of the winner, but just as before, I seriously underestimated my ability.

You live and you learn.

For those that didn’t enter the competition, those that want another shot, or those that to win one of the feature competitions, you’re just in time!

We’re just about half way through May, which is the month hosting the Feature Length Spring Screenplay Competition!

Screenplay Subtext: Writing Between The Lines

May 3rd, 2010

It was during my first internship as a script reader with Stage 3 Studios that I became familiar with the phrase “reading between the lines.” It describes the act of evaluating the subtext within the screenplay.

What is Subtext?

subtext in vicky cristina bacelona

Subtext is something you probably encounter on a daily basis, because it’s how people really communicate. It lives in our actions and our words and often reveals what we really feel or think.

It’s all about what’s being implied rather than said or done. For screenwriters, subtext is often found during dialogue exchanges or in some cases (though not as common) during action description.

Subtext … one of the most commonly ignored areas of screenwriting by novice writers.

Writing Between the Lines

As the screenwriter, you need to become familiar with the phrase “writing between the lines” — it describes the process of creating said subtext throughout your screenplay.

Subtext Examples

Here are three examples of subtext from Vicky Cristina Barcelona – an exceptional film exploring two clashing perspectives of love.

First, when Juan Antonio first approaches Vicky and Cristina. This bit contains a line that can be interpreted differently depending on the viewer, so it’s up to you to decide what the line really means.

Second, when Doug (Vicki’s fiance) calls shortly after Vicki makes love with Antonio — at this point, the subtext tells us that Vicky’s feelings for Doug have waned. Read the rest of this entry »

The Feature Length Spring Screenplay Competition

May 1st, 2010

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Screenplay Competition Details

The Spring Screenplay Competition is the first of four seasonal competitions in 2010 focused on discovering the most talented screenwriters working within the feature-length medium.

Guidelines

  • All submissions must be between 85 – 125 pages in length.
  • Submissions must be submitted in .PDF, .DOC, and .FDR format.

Prizes

  • Publicly announced and recognized by Scriptxray.com
  • Free xCoverage from Scriptxray.com ($125 value)
  • Free Stork to producers from ScriptStork.com ($75 value) – learn more!

Entry Fee

Each submission should be accompanied by an entry fee of $25 — this covers thetime it takes to read and provide xOne Coverage for the feature length material (usually about 2 – 3 hours).

Unlike most competitions out there, the entry fee won’t skyrocket as we approach the deadline.


Submission Deadline

All screenplays must be submitted by May 31st.

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Click the submit button above to submit your screenplay via email. If you’re entry fee is sent from a different email than your screenplay submission, please let us know.

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Overwhelmed with Submissions!

April 30th, 2010

Hey guys,screenplay competition - strongest story setup

Just wanted to toss you an update in regard to the Strongest Story Setup Screenplay Competition …

I’ve been flooded with last minute submissions all of yesterday and today, so I won’t be able to announce the winner until all are read and evaluated.

Thanks for your participation, patience, and awesomeness. The competition grew way beyond my expectations, and I’m already talking to a few companies in regard to sponsoring the next … which I’ll be announcing tomorrow — for sure!

I’m reading them as fast as I can!!!

:)

Strongest Story Setup Deadline Is Tomorrow!

April 29th, 2010

The Strongest Story Setup Screenplay Competition ends tomorrow!

Submit (at least) the first 30 pages of your screenplay to enter — you’ll get free xOne coverage ($39 value), the chance to win a free full xCoverage package (5-7 pages of feedback valued at $125), and become recognized by those reading Scriptxray.com for your work.

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You don’t even need to submit your entire screenplay — thereby enabling those not yet finished to participate as well.

Send over the entry fee via paypal (either by credit card or paypal account)


Next, send your submission in .doc, .pdf, or .fdr to xray@scriptxray.com.

If you have any questions, please free to contact me either here or via Twitter and Facebook.

Best of luck!

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