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Two Ways to Create Mysterious Characters

26 June 2009 No Comment

One thing that always entertains me as a reader is when a screenwriter adds a shade of mystery to a character’s background. It adds depth, darkness, and imperfection, which in turn reflects the human condition.

While creating mystery behind a character can be challenging — it can also be extremely minimalist. Though we’ve been trained to expect answers as an audience, this is not to say you as the storyteller always have to provide them. Withholding information is definitely an art, so there’s plenty of room to explore.

In fact, some of the most memorable moments on screen include those that resist giving the audience the answers they wanted.

1. Withhold information

V for Vendetta delivered a powerful sense of mystery by not revealing the face behind the mask of V. If we were to see his face, we’d have digested the moment in an instant, thrown it out, and forgotten it before the film even had time to wrap up.

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2. Provide Contradicting information.

Another example includes where the Joker came from in The Dark Knight. However, Nolan is talented and courageous enough to explore a different approach — instead of withholding the information, provide …

These are just two extreme examples. Think about Captain Jack Sparrow and the hints of how he became captain of the Black Pearl by making a deal with Davy Jones. Characters with mysterious pasts, dark secrets, and more to them than meets the eye are always more compelling on the page — especially when the protagonist or central character starts to wonder and ask about their mysteries shades of gray. This said, you probably shouldn’t withhold all of the information — that might be a bit far. Find the balance of revealing some information, withholding some, and giving the audience 2+2 so they can come up with the answer on their own — the famous Billy Wilder dictum.
Try combining these two ideas with basic character backstory to create a character with a mysterious past.

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